WITH YOU
3 songwriters from Scotland H.
Genre: Rock/soft rock/ maybe pop/adult alternative
Tempo: fast
Additional Notes:
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Backstory:
The song was originally composed as a slow, whimsical ballad with some ambitious chord progressions and probably, an overly simplistic and idealised view of what was actually involved in forming and sustaining a proper meaningful relationship.
We revisited the song some years later having acquired more life experience and the realisation that even the most initially romantic of love affairs will inevitably have elements of the mundane at times but that we must still try to make the most of what we have. This is acknowledged in the line “In a life less ordinary”
The lyric then moves to an optimistic note, suggesting that with the right partner and a lot of staying power, a long term relationship always has the potential to be fulfilling and life affirming “On the golden wings of eagles we can fly”.
Musically, it was developed from three similar verses adding the bridge and the standalone chorus line.
We worked on creating a punchy, upbeat version maybe adding a tone of the sardonic to the piece and tweaking the initial romantic ‘rose tinted’ verses in a more considered light. With a similar message as the original, but hopefully, a more energetic, fun and thoughtful version.
Lyrics:
With You
Copyright © 2020 Alan Middleton, Paul Stewart Ross, Jane Hasler
Vocals on track: Derek McGowan
Verse
Your graceful shadow fell across me yeah, You're all I ever want to see yeah,
My crazy heart it wants to leap, Your sweet, sweet loving I will keep,
To build with you, fulfilled with you, I'm thrilled with you, with you
Chorus
In a life less ordinary, On the golden wings of eagles we can fly, fly
Verse
The flowers, blossom with your smile upon me, they keep you company a while for me
But you outshine the brightest star, Can take my thoughts to places far
To see with you and to be with you, I'm so free with you, with you
Chorus
In a life less ordinary, On the golden wings of eagles we can fly.
Bridge
Together flying free up in the sky,
When I'm with you I've never been so high.
Verse
Years come and go but we remain together, Joy and comfort we will gain forever,
Love means much more each passing day, When you're not beside me I will say
A prayer for you, that I care for you and I'm there for you, for you,
Chorus
In a life less ordinary, On the golden wings of eagles we can fly, fly