I. How To Proceed:
How Does This Thing Work...
- Meet in the classroom on the scheduled date
and time. You must be present in order to participate in Peer
Feedback.
- Wait for the moderator to begin the
session. The moderator is there to help direct the flow of the conversation
and facilitate the session.
- If you're playing a song for others, be
sure to let them know if there's specific feedback you're looking for and what your
goals are for the song (e.g., get it ready to demo, play it out a club,
record it on your own CD).
- When listening to a song, be sure to type
"done" when you're done listening. That way everyone will know when everyone
has finished listening to the song and are ready to discuss it.
- When offering to comment on a song, remember
to follow the etiquette guidelines below.
II. Feedback
Etiquette: When Playing Songs For Each Other...
- Don't give an opinion unless you're asked for
it and keep your comments on topic. For example, don't offer an opinion on
the chorus music for the song if the writer only wants to know whether the
second verse is confusing lyrically.
- Know the writer's objectives. It makes
a difference in your approach whether the song is a song they would like to
pitch for other artists, versus Film/TV versus a song that will go on their
own independent CD project. It might just be a song they wrote for their
spouse for their anniversary. Be sure to know the writer's objectives so you
can offer the most appropriate suggestions.
- Listen to how the song makes you feel
before trying to analyze it. Some songs break all the rules and still
create an emotional impact. Sometimes that's more important than the
adhering to every principles of good craftsmanship.
- Always acknowledge the positive first.
We all like to hear what is working right about the song before hearing
suggestions about what to change to make it better.
- Use principles of craft when offering
suggestions. Rather than saying, "I thought the music could be better"
try to ground your suggestions in principles of craft as in "I felt there
could be more melodic contrast between the verse and chorus."
- Be helpful rather than hurtful. The
whole point of getting feedback is not about how much smarter you are than
someone else but to help your fellow songwriters make their songs the best
they can be.